eloise2006

nice work on this one! i hope everything goes well in your college journey. at the end of the day, you're amazing just as you are, and both you and your writing are an important addition to this world.

I almost cried reading this omg.

this is so sad-
i just- ii mean can you change the ending so its a bit happier-

The story is so beautiful! I wonder what happen to Snow 😯, Maybe she flew home, I get the story! And it’s sad, you did good on the writing, keep up the work! Have a nice day!

I feel this poem, good work! This is sad too, and very true to most people, keep up the work!

This was a perfect story, I get everything, and the meaning of ‘She did it’, this was sad, but it was a good story too, keep up the writing! Have a nice day! 👋🏽