Soul

I've read a lot on here, but this was the first time i came across something so good. It was really thrilling, keep at it!

I really loved the idea for this story. I like how instead of the "creatures under our beds" being the monsters a human is. One little flaw I noticed was it was somewhat hard to identify which creature was which (I may just have a hard time keeping up though), but overall I really liked it. I hope to see more!

This was such a great story! It was really well written and I loved the storyline!

I loved it, you did a fantastic job tying it all together! I know I'm really late, but I just wanted to show my love for this. You have an amazing writing technique! I had a similar idea to write something like this, so it won't be exactly like yours, but it will have a similar ring to it. I hope that's alright with you because I'm already pretty far into the story. I just wanted you to know that I don't mean to steal your idea and I certainly won't be posting an exact replica of it.

Fantastic story.....

this is amazing

It sounds so much like heat haze daze lol but it’s still a very good story

Thank you for the well-written story.