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I love the vocabulary in this chapter it makes the story more alluring to read. Can't wait for chapter 3!!
I completely relate to your insomnia. Its torturous and doesn't let go. Your mind begins to play a fill-in-the-blank game with reality until, one day, you find that your dreams have intruded on your reality. I hate that you have to go through that.
Good luck and thank you for your wonderful story.
In the smoothly paragraph there are two the's in it in like sentence 8 but I still enjoyed the story.