Soul

Strongly written. I do like it.

Rhythmic and sweet. I do like it.

This was beautiful but it is missing something to make it great.

It would be.

This piece has some minor mistakes and it seems a little force out but it is still good. One advice is try not to use the same word too much. Like "girl" was used. You want to avoid that. Still this was an interesting beginning and I look forward to read what else you got.

Have a good afternoon
Fate🌸

Definitely like how it is written

This was done exquisitely

Great that you expressed this.