United States • 29 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Informative indeed.
The concept you have is a good one but there is too much grammar errors that is hard for me to fully enjoy. Do not fright. I suggest that you ask for an overlook before sumbiting your work to help you out. I do hope to read more of your work in the future. You got this!
-Fate🌸
I love this because of how cute it is. Though, I must admit you need to work out some little things in your story. In my opinion, it was a little too rush for me. The character development was done rather sloppy but it is alright. You are a fantastic writer that will get a hang of it. I really do hope to see you write again.
-Fate🌸
I just love dark stories like this, I really do but this story needs a little bit of work which is fine. It has the potential of being better and with more work it can be. So please do write more stories. I am looking forward to it.
This is excellent but you do have some spelling mistakes. Other than that, it's great stuff.
Great that you expressed this.
Rather cute
Sigh, feelings so rightfully put out but you are young and have so much way to go. I am just going to say this, you can do a lot of things at your age. Love and dating, shouldn't be on your list right now. Go have fun. Do something incredible. It is a waste of time to date when you have your adult years to come. Right now should be about school and having the time of your life.