Soul

This one caught me right away. Hope you can continue with this story. There is so much potential for it.

Happy writing xx

This is grande piece but you do have errors. My advice to you is before posting you should reread it five times and if you are not sure then just ask someone if they can look over it for you to help you catch the mistakes because you are missing some words with other errors. Do not be discouraged. You story is good. Keep on writing.

Have a good evening,
Fate🌸

I liked this. Dark poems are my favorite but towards the end you could of add a little bit more so the last stanza would have a better impact on the readers.

This was done exquisitely

Definitely like how it is written

Strongly written. I do like it.

It is a true thing that happens. In which I also like how this was written. Keep on writing please.

Rhythmic and sweet. I do like it.