🌸Fate

This is a lovely little story to read.

This was a well written story that I was drawn in by the first sentence. Superb piece.

Short but I do understand what you are saying. Keep writing and move forward. You can make it as anything you want to be. I have high hopes for you has a fellow writer.

It would be.

This was done exquisitely

This piece has some minor mistakes and it seems a little force out but it is still good. One advice is try not to use the same word too much. Like "girl" was used. You want to avoid that. Still this was an interesting beginning and I look forward to read what else you got.

Have a good afternoon
Fate🌸

Lmao, that was too funny. Great job.

Great that you expressed this.