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That One Summer Night (Chapter 3)

Congratulations
Your story is great
It exudes magic and a sense of freedom
I'd like to see more of your writing samples
You can contact me at my email.: [email protected]
or alternative.: [email protected]
Your Cincerely
My name is Vangelis Iliopoulos
Author - Literary Critic from Greece.
https://www.lexidromion.eu
https://www.evhl.gr

The plot is extremely excellent.
I would like you to make it better with other scenes. However, I want to see the final picture of your story.
My name is Vangelis Iliopoulos
Author - Literary Critic from Greece.
https://www.lexidromion.eu
https://www.evhl.gr