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evhlgr

evhlgr is from GR Greece • 59 y/o

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Amanda's Diary 1 by Raven Knight

The plot is extremely excellent.
I would like you to make it better with other scenes. However, I want to see the final picture of your story.
My name is Vangelis Iliopoulos
Author - Literary Critic from Greece.
https://www.lexidromion.eu
https://www.evhl.gr

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That One Summer Night (Chapter 3) by 𝔏𝔲𝔠𝔦𝔢𝔫

That One Summer Night (Chapter 3)

Congratulations
Your story is great
It exudes magic and a sense of freedom
I'd like to see more of your writing samples
You can contact me at my email.: [email protected]
or alternative.: [email protected]
Your Cincerely
My name is Vangelis Iliopoulos
Author - Literary Critic from Greece.
https://www.lexidromion.eu
https://www.evhl.gr

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metropolis- by scorp

Congratulations, your writing is excellent.

The word reconciles sensitivity and writing in a calm and confidential time frame that encourages reflective perception. After dawn, writing will wake up, the need for a lyrical flow that leaves a record of life with rhythm returns. As if the word connected the transitory with the most elemental, there is no formal pretense, only the beautiful rhythm of a journey of vital affirmation, in the space of which the traces of tenderness are diluted, the ephemeral preludes of what moves.
The poet reflects on his own identity through memory. To trace time is to hear the mother's voice again, to fly into youthful dreams and learn the blurred calligraphy of emotions, the vanity of life and beauty that slowly transforms into a cold mist, on pages of a fragile memory in countryside: "Life passes, like the jasmine flower."

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