𝙛𝙖𝙞𝙩𝙝𝙛𝙪𝙡

vague, but fantastical. well done!

this was so cute. I loved it!

A little farfetched at times, and Sarah seemed like so many other heroines of popular stories (Katniss of the Hunger Games, Hermione of Harry Potter).
I wish that there was a little more diversity for her character, because she just seems to be there to be a supporting character (and not a very interesting or good one at that, eaither) until the end.
Speaking of which, the end was amazing! I wasn't expecting that, and the quote you used is one of my favorites.
Good job, and keep writing!

Hahaha, if this is what having siblings is like, well, then, maybe its not so great being an only child.

Spectacular writing! Who said this deserved a D?! Teachers, man..., *shakes head*
Anyway, you could be the next big fantasy writer with this gorgeous prose and style! And the cliffhanger... OoO!