United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
The story was obviously full of despair. I was looking for the rescue and it is a shame it never came. Could there be a happier sequel? I hope so.
As one wise person told me once, on my first post, "Sometimes less is more" Something small can still have a big impact. You also define the story as "Terrible" and sure, there are grammar and spelling mistakes, but that's something editing can fix. Otherwise, for the content, it is something we all have to deal with. It's that problem in all of us we can't solve. I try to push it away with "Every down has its up, and every bad day has its good." But it only works now and then. It's a nice story. Could use some polishing, but your content, your work, its nice.
Please don't hurt yourself again! And remember, we are always here for you. And I know what you mean my mental trauma. (hahahaha. Experience! Yay me!) Keep up the nice work!
Great story, Feminist123! But maybe change the age to 12+ since there's a bad word? Besides that, it's great! Keep it up! :)
it's not lame.
i know how you feel. i went through the same thing. I'm happy i was sitting besides you when it happened.
