FlamingGrill

Good jod it is amazing

This was moving. Your pain came through and I hear. I hear you. Please stay strong and keep writing. You're talented.

I like the way this was written but it needs more to make it more powerful. The idea is amazing though and your wording is spectacular.

Good piece. Positive and inspiring. Yes it good advice to think of the hardship and devastation one may leave behind if they commit suicide. But when one feels so down and depressed, trying to think of others is very hard to do.

Excellent wordsmithing.

Very astute

Very well written.
It flowed beautifully.