FlamingGrill

Very well written.
It flowed beautifully.

Very astute

Excellent wordsmithing.

Good piece. Positive and inspiring. Yes it good advice to think of the hardship and devastation one may leave behind if they commit suicide. But when one feels so down and depressed, trying to think of others is very hard to do.

I like the way this was written but it needs more to make it more powerful. The idea is amazing though and your wording is spectacular.

This was moving. Your pain came through and I hear. I hear you. Please stay strong and keep writing. You're talented.

Good jod it is amazing