Ace

I really like this poem. I often come home from school somedays and wonder why I am still living. I feel the same way.

This is really good. Sometimes people lack the courage to speak up, but I don't think that is the case here.

There are a lot of people at our(we go to the same school) school who pretend to be our friends but then call us names behind our backs. We have to support each other. We have to ignore what they say and keep living life.

I feel the same way Laurs(her real nickname at school).

This is an amazing story! I am sure that you will inspire many young dancers.

I absolutely love this poem!

I can totally relate.

For the "I maybe not be trendy but that's just me" part, I suggest(you don't have to) that you delete the 'be' at the end of 'maybe'".