Ace

This is so good! I really shows the emotions that present themselves during a wildfire, or really any kind of destructive incident. Great writing!

Very descriptive of the room. Good job.

This is sooo funny!

Wow, I thought I was having a bad day, guess not. :)

the perfect amount of salt and sugar.

This is so good!

This is really good!

This is an amazing story! I am sure that you will inspire many young dancers.