hazel basil

this is so beautifully written! the way it's formatted is similar to a song...maybe you should write a melody and use this as your lyrics :)

i love how you've captured the pressure of doing good in school with no regard to wellness as a person...I totally understand where you're coming from, my parents are harsh about grades too :) Good work on this one! Keep writing!

Beautiful!

this was so raw and real...this almost made me cry
i know i've never been though what you have but just know i'm here and there are others here too <3

part twoooo!!!!!!

this is so beautiful! I love the imagery and the way you conveyed the story in your words <3