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wow the two last lines really hit me! i wonder where the lake leads...
Amazing story! You've done so well these past months! Keep up the historical work! ^^
I think Holmes would be assessing the potential spy in more detail. What about this for an inner monalogue.
I did not stare back as I wanted him to think I had not noticed him. Instead I looked out across the street several times, but never for long and always pretending something or someone else had caught my attention. How I hoped that he would move and give something about himself away. If he moved with the ease of a younger man that would indicate a disguise. Perhaps some other clue would emerge. To my frustration he did nothing that might give anything away.
This is true! Everyone has their own inner Cosmos. Good story
So cool! I love your story styles! (UwU)ðŸ‘
Keep up the work, and be safe!
I enjoyed this. I liked how you said they went for “the ghastly kill.†That topped it off nicely. Thanks for sharing.