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I enjoyed this. I liked how you said they went for “the ghastly kill.†That topped it off nicely. Thanks for sharing.
So cool! I love your story styles! (UwU)ðŸ‘
Keep up the work, and be safe!
This is true! Everyone has their own inner Cosmos. Good story
I think Holmes would be assessing the potential spy in more detail. What about this for an inner monalogue.
I did not stare back as I wanted him to think I had not noticed him. Instead I looked out across the street several times, but never for long and always pretending something or someone else had caught my attention. How I hoped that he would move and give something about himself away. If he moved with the ease of a younger man that would indicate a disguise. Perhaps some other clue would emerge. To my frustration he did nothing that might give anything away.
Amazing story! You've done so well these past months! Keep up the historical work! ^^
wow the two last lines really hit me! i wonder where the lake leads...
Beautiful story my friend
I like the descriptions of Everist, you've done well there. You could've added details of how Hillary was feeling, like aching legs or gasping for breath. When he makes it try saying he felt exhilerated or triumphant. Back then he might have been discouraged from showing emotions but he could still have felt them deep inside himself.