hercules

I loved your piece of writing. Well done.

A superb follow up. I'm looking forward to reading the third. Well done.

I like this part of the story as much as the first two parts. At the end of the last part I wondered if Elaine was the enchantress without knowing it. Well done.

Amazing! I loved it. Well done.

Brilliant! I loved it. Well done.

I enjoyed your poem. Well done.

Superb! I loved it. Lady Katherine flying with Elaine reminded me of the scene in the snowman, where the little boy is flying with the snow man. Well done.

A great piece of writing. Well done.