hercules

I'm well impressed with your story. I've looked into such things so it resonates on my level. Well done.

Brilliant! An amazing and compelling story from start to finish. I wondered if the white light was some kind of alien or UFO, or a being from another dimension. Keep up the great work! Well done.

I enjoyed your story. Well done.

I really enjoyed your story. Well done.

I enjoyed your story. Well done.

BEN BROWN

A great story. It reminds me of the Never Ending story when Bastian ends up reading the story in his school attic. I will read the rest of your stories. Well done.

BEN BROWN

Another excellent story. The way you described the colours at the beginning brought to mind the twelve astrological star signs. Towards the end it made me think of the light and shadow traits of ones character. Well done.

I really enjoyed your poem. Well done.