Tiffany

Wow. This is deep.

Is this a true? If it is this is such a touching story and nobody should have to got through this. This poem almost made me cry. Feel better.

You shouldn't wonder those stupid.... wait.... this is an autobiography?!?!?!?! NO! Hey! People wonder, people care. People out there will always worry and wonder for you. It's a sad musing, and makes everyone think, but still. HEY! People care. They always will.

It's interesting. I see a vigilante scenario where you have someone just going against those that abuse. However, that quickly changes at the end. It's very good, and the writing is interesting. The poems seem to get better as the story goes on, with the last one being the best. This might be a literary device, or practice, but overall I enjoyed it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

I've never read any of your other poems before this one so I can't comment on the others yet or compare this one to them but I thoroughly enjoyed this and didn't want to stop reading it if I'm honest I didn't want it to end. :)

It's some good fluff. The flashback is in amazing detail, and I'm not sure if it was a dream or the past. ()-() It's a nice story. Not sure who lit the fire though. Mom, daughter, or son. Who knows? Keep writing! We will keep reading!