United States • 25 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
Oof. Sorry, old habit. ANYWAYS, It's a nice story. It makes a character and a world in which unknown details are filled in by the original song. Also, the OP is kinda a jerk. He was getting married to someone and left her. It seems like an endless cycle, with the fiance being the new Op. Otherwise, it's a nicely written story with much emotions. Keep writing! We will keep reading.
Awww, I love the happy story :P. It's nice! Very peppy :). Keep writing! We will keep reading.
I... I'm sorry. Nobody deserves that. This poem is heavy. Tough, and hurts. But... it is very well written. The lyrics ring deep and resound withing. It's a sad poem, but a beautiful one.
"Never give up, up up. Never let go go go. Never give up. Never let go. You can reach your end goal."
-Pewdiepie, 2016
It's a nice poem that transverses a sad story. Keep writing! We will keep reading!
HEY! No self hate! You are an amazing human being, I can already tell. You have so much to look after in your life. Don't waste the fun times feeling down for yourself. But... I'm also here to review the work. It's good, fits its purpose, and well written. BUT STILL! Be nice to yourself. Please.
Another good part to the series. I mean, well written. I wouldn't really call it a "happy" story cus... you know. Abuse. Yeah. Still. Well written, nicely played. Can't wait for the next bit! Keep writing! We will keep reading!
