Tiffany

It's... blood boiling. I swear to god if I get my hands on that son of a bi-... Nope, gotta keep it PG. Still. It's a nice story. I think it could be polished a bit, but it's very close to perfect. Keep writing! We will keep reading!

This is a well written story. Dark and brooding.

Oh no... I'm so sorry. I wouldn't wish this upon my worst enemy from the universe and back. But how you've expressed your feelings and your thoughts are absolutely beautiful in the most wicked way possible. Hope you feel better. Hope these five stars and a virtual hug would make you feel ok because that is literally all you can do with all hell broken loose and we are two continents apart... so yea. :)

Wow. Deep.

Ouch. Hope you feel better. Its awesome you stood up to that person.

Wow. This is deep.

its amazing...i have never read a story so good....its my favorite one yet.

It's interesting. I see a vigilante scenario where you have someone just going against those that abuse. However, that quickly changes at the end. It's very good, and the writing is interesting. The poems seem to get better as the story goes on, with the last one being the best. This might be a literary device, or practice, but overall I enjoyed it. Keep writing! We will keep reading!