~ twixx ~

very nice!!!!! eeeeeeeE :D might be. . . ever so slightly inspired by something i never finished writing, right? lol

creepy! i like it. it reminds me of fairytale-type things with an enchanted book :>

i do have a generally unrelated piece of advice that i found on tumblr: try not to use "was" too much. for example: instead of "it was cold," you'd write "the freezing air nipped at her exposed skin." using "was" a lot is a sign of summarizing. which is good if that's what you're going for (like showing a long amount of time passing) but odd-sounding in action :P

this is epiccc the writing style is so smooth-sounding??? (plus wilbur pog)

i don't even remember writing this, but apparently, it was originally my idea. in that case, you wrote this so well you can keep the concept! XD i love your description of mc's inner thoughts, and this is so cool aaá