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Joshua_12

Joshua_12 is from US United States • 22 y/o

Death is not the greatest loss in life, the greatest loss is what dies inside while still alive. Never surrender. -Tupac

Joshua_12

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Blitzø reviewed The mirror man

Whoa, that gave me chills. You did really well! :)

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MyBreath
MyBreath reviewed The mirror man

I think it was really good, I had shivers after finishing. I think there was one part I didn't quite understand but other than that it was really good!

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IanG
IanG reviewed Five Fingers

In paragraph seven, would it be better if the girl was hugging her doll for comfort rather than playing with it? That seems more plausible given that she's just suffered a terrible loss. A poor family might well have to keep working through the shock but they'd be feeling upset, just having to carry on in spite of that. Keep practising and you'll master that.

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Khloe
The-Enemy reviewed This isn't the end

thank you so much for this

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Khloe
The-Enemy reviewed I met a girl

that's so sweet

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coco
coco reviewed This isn't the end

this is so good babe great job

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bandgeek
Child_of_God reviewed This isn't the end

I started crying. thank you for this its amazing

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SJAnon
Selena Joan reviewed This isn't the end

This is so important right now, with Covid-19 going on as well. Suicide rates and depression are at an all time high. Thank you for this.

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