United States • 22 y/oReviews Received
I love you! I will always be here for you and thank you for this!
We are surrounded by images of people who are physically perfect. It puts a lot of pressure on us to measure up. Try to remember celebrities have a lot of help from make up artists and even personal trainers. Teenagers in films are often portrayed by twenty somethings. Photos can even be airbrushed. Most of us are not so lucky. Just because you don't look like your favourite singer or actor, it doesn't make you a failure.
Very simple and to the point. I think you did a good job. There's a point where you wrote "March" when I think you meant "much", but otherwise, I think it's pretty good.
Omg, me and my best friend was reading this together, and was freaked out, we even said if we saw a doll on the road we’d be gone as fast as we can, keep up the work! I love this story!!
This is so cute and sweet, such talent to but the details of how much you love her! Keep up the work!
Simple, straight to the point. Sounds like shes a great girl :)
I really enjoyed your piece of writing. I brought to mind Darth Vader still having good in him. Well done.
Draco's feelings in this piece are very convincing. It fits well with the original stories. I recall that at the very end of 'Deathly Hallows' Harry glimpses Draco at the station, but while they're not friendly they don't show fear of each other. That being so the bit about him trying to reform fits too.