Reviews Received
Very good! I especially liked the author's note. A very similar experience happened to me when I was about 7. Keep up the good work!
Imagine being in this situation right now, what would you do? I know I would’ve kept calm, and covered the girls mouth too, and asked the teacher if we can barricade the door, because who would just lock it like they ain’t gonna bust the door down? But this was a good story! Keep up the work! Have a good day!
This story really puts you on edge. If my friend was in the locker and the man knew about it I would have gone after my friend, if I died at least my friend wouldn't. The note at the end is very good. Keep it up!