United States • 27 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
This story really puts you on edge. If my friend was in the locker and the man knew about it I would have gone after my friend, if I died at least my friend wouldn't. The note at the end is very good. Keep it up!
Very good! More please!
I would be scared out of my mind. When I was in 1st grade, we heard a gun sound by the school and I was terrified. Beautifully written and keep it up!
It's so beautifully written! I can really picture and I can feel what you feel about this person. Awesome job and keep it up!
dang.... ;-;
absolutely good
