Kat

Oh my gosh. I was almost crying. It was so sad! I hate how that ended (in an obsessed reader way)!

I just cried!! There were a few grammar errors, but those can be fixed easily. I have experiance with heartbreak, and the twist at the end left me heartbroken. I actually miss the narrator!
It might be me just being too attached to reading and books. I really want to hear more from you!
Thank you so much!

Nice! There's one thing - your lines don't have the same rhythm all the way through. What I mean by that is at on part the first line rhymed with the second, at at the end it was the first and third.
I love the meaning of this poem and can't wait to hear more from you!

Love, love, LOVED the poem he wrote for her! I almost cried. No one has ever cared enough to do that for me, but right there I felt some weird connection that completely blew my mind! Thank you!
There are hiccups and grammar errors, but not too many. I advise reading it out loud.

Oh my gosh, I cried so hard. Thank you. Thank you so much.

That was beautiful! I loved it! I can't think of anything to say! I'm rendered speechless (which is hard to do)!

I fell in love with the idea of the story, but there are a few things you might want to work on. Some of the sentences aren't grammatically correct (Ex. Loving you, made me hate myself).
I think that finding a different way of saying "I fell in love with," would make it seem a lot more interesting and make the reader want to read more.
This is a great start and I can't wait to hear more from you!

This was great! Slightly confusing, but I get the point. I think you did very well. The ending could be explained slightly more, but I like it.