Kat

Wow. Jaw-dropping and convincing story that will definitly keep you up all night.

That was amazing! I held off on reading it for a while because I thought it was the original poem, but that was hallarious! Please do write more!!

Wow! Great! If it were a little longer it would've felt more complete, but the irony and complications of the situations made it worth it.

Oh my gosh, I love it! With littler sibling myself, I hope there will never come the day when I have to watch them suffer through heartbreaks and smiteness (is that a word?).
I love your writing!!!

I felt very inspired (and sometimes to get better at your gift you have to strangely - metaphysically - punch critics in the face). Please keep writing and staying confidant. People need your voice and understanding!! The world will only get darker, those with light need to shine their brightest!!

I loved it. I hope to be reading a lot of your stories. I connected gravely to this price of your writing, even though there were a few grammatical errors. If I were your parents/family, I would be proud.

That's horrible!! (Not the writing, the emotions and pain)
I just died inside.
You probably feel a lot worse. I am so sorry. I hope you've gotten over it somehow and were able to fin happiness. I sometimes dread waking up, to be truthful, but I don't know exactly how you feel.
Depression is hard. I hope you feel better soon. Losing loved ones breaks you in a way that can only be forgotten by short distractions. I'm so sorry.

Wow! Great!
One thing, the ending was a little confusing. Was the narrator playing the guitar or the version of himself playing the guitar?
It encaptured me like light (it would make sense if you knew me)! I hope I get to hear more!