Kat

That was amazinging - but you made it seem like the wife was the problem.
In my short experience I found that:
1) men zone out while watching sports
2) when married they tend to fart and pass gas more
3) the toeilt seat struggle IS REAL
4) they don't understand much about what happens once a month - only that it's painful for both man and woman.
5) everything you say can and will be ignored.
😂 Either way, hallarious and worth reading again!!

Holy crap! That's amazing!! I laughed so hard I banged my head on my bed frame! I just can't stop

Holy crap!!! That was hallarious!!! Love it!! Please do keep it up!

Holy crap that is amazing, sad, and hallarious. I count decide okay laughing or crying. (I ended up falling off my desk at school - that got people's attention 😆)

Wow! Really good! I love the way you used words that made he setting feel even more suspisious or scary, and you took us into the mind of the wolf cub.
The problem I found was that there was a strange gap between when he cub was sleeping to when he saw his dead sister. How did that happen? Where was the fried or misery?
Doing great! Keep it up!!

Wow!!! That is a great plot line!! One problem though. There are a bunch of grammatical gaps or errors and some punctual mistakes.
I also wanted to ask, where are the moments when the girl's friend couldn't speak, had to step back, and come at it a moment later?
Could she be fingering the gun while she talked? That way the audience (readers) would know that something was in her pocket but didn't know what exactly it was. Something like explaining the hard, cold metal would've sufficed.
Great job on the plot line and I am excited to read more of your work!

Wow. That was funny and crazy at the same time. I'm not really sure what to say.... good job?

Amazing, showed passion and clearly created the emotions of the poem. It cut deeply into me and I hope that if you're going through that - that everything works out alright. (Animals help a lot)
-KP