Kat

I liked it, I kind of agree on the rant part, but I agree soooooo muuuccchhh about the self distructive motives of humans and how they act against themselves.
Thank you!

Very powerful and sends an emotional experience to all the readers. You accidentally said site instead of sight near the end, but besides that it sounds great!

There are some great aspects of this price of writing, but there is also a feeling of incompletion. Please do write more.

Sounds great! A little short but I get where you're going.
-KP

It sounds great, a few punctual and grammatical errors, but so far it sounds pretty good.
I understand what it is to first wade into the water. I slowly went in, but at chest deep I realized that the shore was becoming harder to see.
I find that it is easier to go in than out. You can come in, in less than three minutes. You come out from three months to three years - and to some even more.
It is hard to be in these hardships, you feel that you can't reach out for help because you are embarrassed about what you have done - or feel that they wouldn't understand.
Hang in here! -KP

Great job! Touching and tear-bringing. I know it wasn't one of your strongest works, but it was one of the good ones that I have read on this website. (Sometimes people write about cat fur and it drives me nuts!!!)
You're doing great! -KP

Sounds great! I love how you made it questionable who was the monster and it left the reader wondering how the monsters lost their sister. Great job and a good show of imagination!
-KP

Loved it!
One suggestion - the 'pain' and 'again' rhyme really killed the rhythm of the poem. It made my brain stop to look over the stanza instead of praise the work itself.
Besides that, I believe you are doing great!