United Kingdom • 26 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
Good job! Really took the reader through the emotions. Thanks for sharing!
-KP
Amazing!! I tend to avoid reading things about different religions (it just makes me uncomfortable), but that was great and changed my whole prospective! Good luck for the future!
LOVE!! And that's great about the grades!! I hope everything is great in the future! Can't wait to hear more! Amazing detail!
I think it's great. There are a few things you could work on, but I think that it was amazing! Really brought tears to my eyes and made me stop and think. Thanks for sharing!
HOLY CRAP! That was amazing! Just WOW
Oh my gosh I feel like this all the time!! Great job!!
That's almost definitly me! I daydream continuously but I don't think that it's that big. I can snap out of it if I want to, but I usually don't want to. Great work!!
-KP
Holy cow!! That's great!! Are you going to write more? When you're talking about wondering if the dude is hung to split her in half you accidentally say my instead of me, but besides that I found no more errors.