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Sounds great, but may I ask, why did you say it was so important to you? In might be butting in a bit but I'm naturally curious.
I found this very amusing and true. There are some things people say that can get on your nerves to the point of snapping them. Take "getting on my nerves" for instance. I use it, but not as constantly as some of my friends might. Wanting to snap someone's neck for the incorrect grammar and usage of wording is something that most writers share. 😜 -KP
Good job! Really took the reader through the emotions. Thanks for sharing!
-KP
I felt very inspired (and sometimes to get better at your gift you have to strangely - metaphysically - punch critics in the face). Please keep writing and staying confidant. People need your voice and understanding!! The world will only get darker, those with light need to shine their brightest!!
Great job. Really rendered me speechless (which is hard to do)
I loved it. I hope to be reading a lot of your stories. I connected gravely to this price of your writing, even though there were a few grammatical errors. If I were your parents/family, I would be proud.