Kat

Oh my gosh, I love it! With littler sibling myself, I hope there will never come the day when I have to watch them suffer through heartbreaks and smiteness (is that a word?).
I love your writing!!!

That was amazing! I held off on reading it for a while because I thought it was the original poem, but that was hallarious! Please do write more!!

Wow. Jaw-dropping and convincing story that will definitly keep you up all night.

Oh my gosh it's so amazing!! Just one editing problem, when you're describing the lady for the first time you accidentally said "he" instead of "she." It was great and depressing at the same time.

Wow, that was cool. You think you are going to write more? That would be awesome. I'm hooked. :) -Kaleigh

That's awesome. I only had to read it once, my mind works weirdly. Loved the pattern and copied inconvenience. :) -KP

Holy crap (I almost literally did so when I found that laughing could go on inevitably)!! That was so awesome! I was NOT expecting that. Thank you so much you made my day.

I think it was a great plot line, and the character does seem like she is in the fifties/ a teenager! Great job!