Kat

Wow. That was funny and crazy at the same time. I'm not really sure what to say.... good job?

Wow!! Touching and wondering!! I have so many unanswered questions, though.
Why did the wife and children disappear? Were they dead before or were they just trying to coax him out of bed from the window? Is that why he got up? Because he wanted to see his wife and kids?
Great job! -KP

This has a true meaning, but sounds a little hasty or rushed, and make me question if you should've made this a poem of not. Though the message is clear and knowing, which I love to see.
-KP

Days like this will come and go, leaving impressions and wounds. You just have to learn how to bandage them and let them become unhurtful scars. Hang in there!
-KP

Wow. That really got my mind thinking, and sometimes that can be dangerous 😆. Great job! A few grammar and punctuation errors but it sounds amazing!

I just died inside. But one thing- what happened to the dread? The inability to move and speak? The heaetbreak? I think it was well written but it would make the reader more powerfully emotional if you had added the feelings running through his head when he was told about his wife.

Wow! Great! If it were a little longer it would've felt more complete, but the irony and complications of the situations made it worth it.

Love, love, LOVED the poem he wrote for her! I almost cried. No one has ever cared enough to do that for me, but right there I felt some weird connection that completely blew my mind! Thank you!
There are hiccups and grammar errors, but not too many. I advise reading it out loud.