Kat

Wow. Jaw-dropping and convincing story that will definitly keep you up all night.

Loved it! Please write more! There were some confusing grammar situations in the second paragraph, but besides that, I think you did pretty well!
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-KP

This sounds great! I love the way the words roll off the reader's tongue like they were meant to be there. The imagery is amazing and I can't wait to hear more from you.

That was beautiful. I loved the way you put everything. I feel there are a few grammar errors in the beginning, and reading your work out loud seems to help with that.
Please keep writing more, you've got the talent.

There were a few grammar mistakes, like "seen" instead of "see," and you forgot to end the part where the narrator speaks with the ", but besides that is was beautiful and amazing. I hope you write more

Really great! I loved the way the lines smoothed together. Very clever!

I love how you made it not rhyme but still seem catchy. It's hard to do that! You are a very talented writer. Can't wait to hear more!

I suffer greatly from anxiety, and hearing it explained in words got me thinking. I did feel anxiety while reading this, and it also comforted me that other people can have the same symptoms. I believe that this is a story, wether people are relating to genres when they are saying it's not or whatever.
Any who, I think it was great.