Reviews Given
I like it, very deep, and real.
I like it, your characters are very detailed, is this fiction or your real life?
So there are a few grammar and spelling errors, but the story is very good, and it carries a very important message.
Tip: copy and paste your story into google docs or word, and use there spell check, and grammar check programs to fix the spelling and grammar problems. Then once its all fixed just copy and paste it back on to
Wow, just WOW.
I liked it a lot, good job.
best one yet