Kat Dickens

I liked it a lot, good job.

So true, love it

so true, we need to stop taking advantage of our planet

I like it, your characters are very detailed, is this fiction or your real life?

so freaking true.

wow! just WOW!

So there are a few grammar and spelling errors, but the story is very good, and it carries a very important message.
Tip: copy and paste your story into google docs or word, and use there spell check, and grammar check programs to fix the spelling and grammar problems. Then once its all fixed just copy and paste it back on to

Wow, that deep!