United States • 18 y/o • FemaleReviews Given
I love this story, and I can not wait to read part three!
Love the story, but not trying to be mean, but there are a few grammar, and spelling errors. But the story id great! :)
WOW! This is a very deep story, and one of the best short stories I have read!
Lol, I am never going to say that I'm having a bad day!
I am laughing so hard!
well... that was a twist I didn't see coming. This reminds me of something that should be in the book, "Scary stories to tell in the dark." And I mean that in a good way. I liked it.
Wow, just WOW.
Heavy, and so full of feeling, one thing I suggest is to work on your grammar. (but don't feel bad I struggle with it too) You could try copy and pasting it into either word or google docs, and then use that to help fix those mistakes, I mean that what I do. Also if you could see if you can download Grammarly, cause then it will point out the mistaked while you type it on this website.