Zimbabwe • 27 y/oReviews Received
Beautiful! The last sentence needs a capital letter and gat is actually spelled got. Maybe add an apostrophe S at the end of she, like: She's got no clue. A beautiful poem, keep writing!
Beautiful! Your special one is lucky as hell to have you! Just a few grammatical errors. You have some run-on sentences and a few typos. If you would like me to tell you where they are, I would be happy to. But other than that, your writing is gorgeous! I can't wait to read more!
I can relate to this. I don’t easily open up to people & it’s hard for me to ask for help most of the time :(
This is so sad, so heart-felt.....
Well done!
So well written. Loved it!