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Legolas_Greenleaf is from US United States • 20 y/o • Female

"There you are sweetheart sorry I'm late I was looking everywhere for you."-Howl

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Reviews Received

Sentimental_creature
♥ ᵍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ ♥ reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #1

Ugh, this is so sweet, a lil sappy, but sweet. Please, write the next part. Soon.

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Sentimental_creature
♥ ᵍ๏вℓ𝓲ℕ ♥ reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #2

ReEeEeEe WrIte MoRe RiGHt NoWw AAAAAAAAAAAH.

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H2o
Ace reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #1

the perfect amount of salt and sugar.

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H2o
Ace reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #2

this was good, maybe in the next part you could add a twist of some sort.

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tayloremilyadaros
tayloremilyadaros reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #1

love it its cute, tbh you came on a little strong on the first few texts, next time just ease into it, but other than that i love it!

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tayloremilyadaros
tayloremilyadaros reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #2

dont stop now! and add some sort of twist or like other characters or something, but it was good!

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tayloremilyadaros
tayloremilyadaros reviewed The Pretty Girls Friend Part #3

no. no no no. you can not just end it there! the ending was so short! maybe write another version of the story that is not just a text but more of a narrative? but dont leave it like this!

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ThomastheRay
Thomas Ray reviewed The Power of Dreams; Prologue

I'll be honest, this is hard to read because of the formatting. A few more paragraphs would be super helpful. The story itself feels very playful, and I look forward to more of it.

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