Reviews Received
love it its cute, tbh you came on a little strong on the first few texts, next time just ease into it, but other than that i love it!
no. no no no. you can not just end it there! the ending was so short! maybe write another version of the story that is not just a text but more of a narrative? but dont leave it like this!
I'll be honest, this is hard to read because of the formatting. A few more paragraphs would be super helpful. The story itself feels very playful, and I look forward to more of it.