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This isn't a story though.
Sorry, this is absolutely unreadable.
This is unreadable, mate. Please revise your work before submitting it for people to read. You only come off as lazy and disrespectful when you post it this way.
While the subject matter is important, MaKaylee, this is not a story.
There are other platforms more suited for your writing if you want to post excerpts and vignettes. Disregarding the posting Guidelines is bad form.