United States • 19 y/o • FemaleReviews Received
It is a great poem, i like the rythm
damn.
that was dark, but really good.
Great job! I hope you write a second part!
The plot is nice, but the wording and flow of the story needs some work.
you lost me a little and the story was a little tense, try to be more unique, still, it was cool.
