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this poem touched my heart , real and deep and i love the rhymes, keep it up

I agree with oxygen. Keep working on the poetry! ;p

It's kinda confusing and random but mysterious. I liked it and I think you should try writing more poetry. :D

thanks a million

Man this was too true! Ah, you illustrated my inner writer and reader fighting so well!

Its good that you're self-critical, if you want to be a writer that's a hopeful sign. I think you improved as the piece went on.