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Great story! My friend's little sister loved it!

depressing...but it has a great moral to it

That was deep and great! Write more!

I like how you connected this story to others...fascinating friendship!

Dark, but such a deep meaning! personally love it.

I can relate so much! It's really embarrassing and awkward... but you described very well!

Dark but beautifully written. Love twists people's minds and I feel like you showed that in this story. Great job!

Nice...but maybe you can describe how love can be good too? Besides that, I think it's a nice story. Can't wait to read the next one!