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Loved this story.

Nice twist at the end

I don't usually appreciate poetical prose, but I do really like this. I think you have talent, continue writing.....

This is so sad, so heart-felt.....
Well done!

Well done Paul, I like the way you built up your characters

Great story. I especially liked the last line.

I really liked the interesting twist of the ending....

I loved this story; one of the best I've read here to date. Well done!