Lussac

please find time to write some more, you have talent

Great build up of tension..... & I just wasn't expecting the twist at the end. Hilarious!

Brilliant. I love it.

Very powerful piece of writing!

Looking forward to Part II
Is she going to be banished from the Fairy world?

The ending was so unexpected I had to just laugh out loud!

What a tragic story & very well written, Well done

Excellent story