Reviews Given
very poignant, well done !
What a beautiful story
Loved this story.
I don't usually appreciate poetical prose, but I do really like this. I think you have talent, continue writing.....
This is so sad, so heart-felt.....
Well done!
Well done Paul, I like the way you built up your characters
I loved this story; one of the best I've read here to date. Well done!
So so sad..... You are very talented SamZ.
I liked the build up of the story, all except for the last line; I think the ending needs some more work to make it 'complete' I'm sure it will be worth it!