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I agree that this could be outstanding if developed further. Obviously, it seems a little confusing at first as we are bombarded with so many fantasy characters so quickly, but there is an awful lot of good stuff here to work with.... Please stick with it and tell us some more.....

Looking forward to Part II
Is she going to be banished from the Fairy world?

Very powerful piece of writing!

brilliant start. Please write some more....

Fantastic story.....

Am intrigued..... Great start.
Are there any more instalments? I hope so

Yes, spooky describes this to a 'T'