Reviews Given by Lussac on Short Stories 101

Sleep Kills by

I quite liked this - up to the final paragraph about the new family, which I think spoiled the story. I think it would be much better with a different ending... or even (in my opinion) just to use the last sentence after Robin's death & end the story there

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

Lost Child by Nessie19

So very sad!
You really drew me into your 'hurt'
I wish you all the best for the future...

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

The Mean Girl by sadstory

Please do continue writing.... It can be very therapeutic

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

Rape Victim by reachamongthestars

terrible!!!! and yes, I agree - you must tell....

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

I Need to Say Something by Dari Poulson

Well said

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

You. by lime

So simple and so sweet! Write more...

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

The Interview by nkwrites

Looking forward to reading more.....

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

Right here, right now by Billy Foster

I liked this.... Liked the way you show us Simon's 'annoying' characteristics drop by drop....
I could not imagine where the story was going either...
Hope you write some more....

11 Dec, 2019 0 Edit Delete

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