France • 62 y/oReviews Given
I quite liked this - up to the final paragraph about the new family, which I think spoiled the story. I think it would be much better with a different ending... or even (in my opinion) just to use the last sentence after Robin's death & end the story there
So very sad!
You really drew me into your 'hurt'
I wish you all the best for the future...
Please do continue writing.... It can be very therapeutic
terrible!!!! and yes, I agree - you must tell....
Well said
So simple and so sweet! Write more...
Looking forward to reading more.....
I liked this.... Liked the way you show us Simon's 'annoying' characteristics drop by drop....
I could not imagine where the story was going either...
Hope you write some more....